Age/Gender: 19, Male
Location: Earth (duh)
Job: Music and Flash
Effort is needed for great cartoons. without effort their is no greatness. believe me i know.
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Latest Flash Reviews
In my opinion, I believe that this is a little overrated. Don't get me wrong, I love the series, and your past projects. But when I compare this to your past projects, it falls a little in the middle.
The way I see it, you could of done better.
**SPOILER ALERT**
The ending is also abrupt and at first I wasn't sure what just happened. I mean I see a train appear, then some guy shoots and then a black void.
I was hoping it to be a little better, finally my last complaint is that it moved a little too fast at parts, I get the idea of them moving fast to survive and all but sometimes I don't know who did what.
It almost seems like you stopped trying in the end, and just put in something to cut it off, which I am a little disappointed about.
Your humor and animation was good, I just didn't like the outcome in the end.
Nevertheless
Good work, but you could of done a hell of a lot better, when I compare this to your other projects.
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Very awesome job man, I mean wow. I enjoyed the blur effect you gave him as he moved. At first I thought that was because of the video quality, cuz you know some videos in flash don't want to stay high quality. Never the less, I soon saw that you in fact blurred him away.
My only problem is the angles, sometimes the camera seems to far away or to much on an... angle with the paper. I get the idea of you wanting to show it was on paper and all, but maybe make your drawings larger next time, if you continue this.
Good Job
Author's Response:
thanks...i had a good camera, but its zoom quality was :( and >:p so you know how that goes. i recently had that camera stolen :( so i got the newer model which is frikkin amazing and seems like it was made, specifically, for paper's edge 2. (still working on the title...might just leave like that.)
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Great Job, I haven't seen this creativity since Tarboy. I see you went the extra mile, and having your own music man helps provide your originality A LOT!
I am looking forward to the next episode.
You also had good voice actors as well.
But what I really adored was the motion tweens. Usually motion tweens look unreal or lazy, but with this it looked as good as frame by frame. Besides to me you drew enough for it to be frame by frame. Good Job.
Please let this be a series that will be finished, so many series I've seen always get cut off and the author leaves.
One thing I saw was your image quality with the backgrounds, maybe play around with that. But that isn't really a big deal (I'm referring to the blurred images you used to lower the chances of lag by the way)
What do you use to draw, a regular tablet or an actual one with its own screen?
Oh yeah, and I loved how you had that effect in the credits. 10/10
You are officially my favorite author
Author's Response:
dont compare this crap to tarboy. no comparisson. thanks tho.
i promise it wont be cut off though. i intend very much to keep this going.
i use a tablet with a screen. it pays off in the end.
thanks man
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Latest Audio Reviews
I am not much of a big fan for Hip Hop or Rap and all that jazz, but this is pretty good. Nice Job, You had good instruments and tone.
5/5
10/10
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it
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nice little techno song, I liked the strings.
My only problem is that this song BEGS for a guitar like instrument
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Don't get me wrong it sounded nice, but I used FL Studio, and apparently it seems to me that you just remixed another song, instead of compiling your own composure. You didn't even do that much to it either, the full song itself (except the beginning) was the same exact loop over and over. Not only that but it also seems to just be cut off at the end. So in all fairness it seems like you didn't even try that hard.
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