DrClay's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Paper's edge]

Very Nice

Very awesome job man, I mean wow. I enjoyed the blur effect you gave him as he moved. At first I thought that was because of the video quality, cuz you know some videos in flash don't want to stay high quality. Never the less, I soon saw that you in fact blurred him away.
My only problem is the angles, sometimes the camera seems to far away or to much on an... angle with the paper. I get the idea of you wanting to show it was on paper and all, but maybe make your drawings larger next time, if you continue this.

Good Job

stickbob123 responds:

thanks...i had a good camera, but its zoom quality was :( and >:p so you know how that goes. i recently had that camera stolen :( so i got the newer model which is frikkin amazing and seems like it was made, specifically, for paper's edge 2. (still working on the title...might just leave like that.)

[LARRY episode 1]

Awesome man

Great Job, I haven't seen this creativity since Tarboy. I see you went the extra mile, and having your own music man helps provide your originality A LOT!
I am looking forward to the next episode.
You also had good voice actors as well.
But what I really adored was the motion tweens. Usually motion tweens look unreal or lazy, but with this it looked as good as frame by frame. Besides to me you drew enough for it to be frame by frame. Good Job.
Please let this be a series that will be finished, so many series I've seen always get cut off and the author leaves.

One thing I saw was your image quality with the backgrounds, maybe play around with that. But that isn't really a big deal (I'm referring to the blurred images you used to lower the chances of lag by the way)

What do you use to draw, a regular tablet or an actual one with its own screen?

Oh yeah, and I loved how you had that effect in the credits. 10/10
You are officially my favorite author

Jazza responds:

dont compare this crap to tarboy. no comparisson. thanks tho.
i promise it wont be cut off though. i intend very much to keep this going.

i use a tablet with a screen. it pays off in the end.

thanks man

[Get on My Horse]

addicting, and fun to watch

Nice song too, good job. Once again you managed to make a great flash loop, and apparently its pretty popular. Bravo good sir

[SW epII:Attack of Megaman]

eeehhh

I'm sorry, but most of this footage is stolen. I don't feel as if this should belong on newgrounds, I mean you did a good job with sound editing and all, but this is the type of thing I would expect on youtube. I question on how this actually got through the portal, being the fact that its a flash site and not a video site, and also most of this is just stolen footage with no sound. I hate to be such a harsh reviewer, but this is just how I feel

[CD-i Phillips is awesome]

funny i guess

I personally believe it would be more respected on youtube, then on here... Anyway nice job. The lines were a little thick and all, and some of the art probably could of been better, but that also adds to this cartoon.
It wasn't really funny, like I chuckled a little, but it was interesting to watch

[The Library Party]

Neat

Its silly, I enjoyed it. What I mainly liked is how you had each head have a different type of motion for when they would make the sound that accured. I also lol'd at the woman's head who exploded, that head animation was my favorite one.

You got good picture editing skills, nice job.

[T.V. Licker]

LOL cool

Your style looked great, I loved the pixelated look, and the actual drawings. The flash was bother weird, but entertaining. It kind of reminds me of something David Firth would of done.

Good Job

[Left 4 Bed]

I am disturbed...

Very funny and good art... but I have no fucking clue what just happened...
other then the rape

[Mortal Kombat: Betrayal 2]

Lacking

Your storyline is great, but it lacked sound.
Your music of choice was great, yet your animation seemed jumpy

The point is, I was hoping for sound effects, and such. It almost looked as if everything was made from photos, maybe increase your fps or so, because I would love to see you improve. Because that is all you need, improvement

kamionero responds:

Thank you! that's great criticism!
I am def. a begginer when it comes to animation, so ur advice is soundly taken!
I hear you on the sound thing (lol no pun intended) but when i definetly failed at sound coordination, i just cant get it right, so i just decided to go w the music video style.

[Captain Planet Strip Club]

Nice Job and all

I just have one question
Why is this rated M? The only thing I saw that is for atleast teenagers was the bouncing tits (with a bra on)

anyway, I liked the art and the voices. I just thought you could of gone a little further with what you had. But still, this was a really awesome flash, plus you had some good jokes.